Re: [TCML] Nevada Lightning Laboratory on Wikipedia

[Brandon Garretson <garretsontech@xxxxxxxxx>]

There are much more mundane topics on Wikipedia that should be deleted
than this one.
I think the problem with the article is that it reads more like the
mission statement on a resume than an interesting and exciting Wiki
page.
I would want to see some pictures (even generic streamer pics to get
it going), maybe even a short video clip or two.
Some re-wording to loose the mission statement feel and present more
of an encyclopedic entry would do it a lot of justice.
It should read more like a story starting with founders, dates, naming
some names, the founders backgrounds and educations, trials and
tribulations, did they ever close or go bankrupt? how did they get
back on their feet? Anyone famous get involved?...That sort of thing.
Give it some hype and some fluff (factual hype and fluff of course),
paint a picture in the readers mind of how cool the place is and Im
sure the deletion consideration will be revoked.


On Sun, Jan 2, 2011 at 1:58 PM, Gary Peterson <g.peterson@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> The Wikipedia article "Nevada Lightning Laboratory" located at (
> http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nevada_Lightning_Laboratory ) is being
> considered for deletion in accordance with Wikipedia's deletion policy.
>
> Your thoughts on the matter can be shared at the article's entry on the
> Articles for deletion page.
>
> Feel free to edit the article but the article must not be blanked and the
> 'being considered for deletion' notice must not be removed until the
> discussion is closed.
>
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